This is a great poem its so dark and sad but very deep great job!!!

laura

Beautiful . There's darkness in it, yet a pretty hope . I normally don't like poems that use so many rhymes in one stanza, because it normally doesn't work or sound right .
Yours, worked (:

..__MiNDYY

Wow this was such a great poem. i think you did a wonderful job on writing it. it was simply amazing. keep on writing 5/5

~Kristina

Wow. this was a really beautiful poem, so sad and hopeless feeling, yet strong in it's own way.... but beautiful, and the flow was really smooth too, 5/5 and i'm adding this to my fav's
gabriella

This is another beautiful piece from you, the whole poem is really powerful, it flowed nicely too, I love your choice of words, well done.

To the witchery and darkness that fills every cave.
^^ I really LOVE that line. It's really dark and I find it in somewahat 'evil'

You deserve a 5/5! Keep writing my friend.

Wow..this was a beautiul poem...u r an awesome poet
if only i knew how to put thoughts onto paper as well as u lol!!!
brilliant
keep it up
tk care
bree

Amazing it painted a picture in my head so ya it was great...

That was great! it put a picture in my head nice job

I really like this too
The image of a girl lying in the snow, looking up to see her "knight in shining armor"
and the way it all combines together to make a sort of story is incredible!!
I can really relate to this one, too.
The rhyme is awesome the stanzas perfect. It was a fantastic read.
Thank you so much for sharing!! :)

I adored this poem! Keep it up! 5/5
XTinkX

Your poems all create such amazing imagery and this one doesn't dissapoint. I also loved the rhyming style, it was quite unique 4/5

That was so beautiful <3

That was so beautiful <3

An amazing poem.
beautiful. && well written.
good flow.
sad. && so full of meaning.
5/5.

It's beautifull. ^_^ 5/5

The imagery you painted in this was beautifully done. it creates some very vivid pictures for the reader. it was like i could see everything that was happening. i thought the repetition of the first stanza as the last worked nicely. sometimes repetition can kill a poem but you pulled it of wonderfully here. managed to get your point across without being overbearing. the only thing i didn't like about this was the repeated use of "I" try eliminating some of those and you'll find the flow gets even better.

Your an excellent writer!!! I love it!

Your an excellent writer!!! I love it!

Wow! great poem x

That was awesome...i loved it, the ending sorta reminded of how this guy i likes keeps going over to my best friend when he gets mad at me...but OFF the subject....what was great and i loved it and its going right on my favorite list, lol, keep it up! =)