Wow. how depressing. good job.

Sounds like you are incredibly depressed to me , your poem speaks for its' self and you too. Good job on the poem ,and capitalize all your ( i's )

your friend Tracy d 5 for trying hard , and expressing yourself as you did,

Wow.. i love depressing poems.. good job!! you should read my poems sometimes

I thought this was a good poem. My only sugestion would be maybe try to come up with other words besides "anyways" Maybe you could do..

Hide from the mirrors,
they all lie anyway.
run away from the house,
it isn`t a home anyhow.
stay away from the "friends",
its not like they like me anyway.
ignore all the words,
they dont mean it anyhow.
die quickly and quietly,
i hate myself anyway.

it sounds a bit better that way and it flows better then with all of the "Anyways" You dont have to do it.. It is just a sugestion..

I agree with ImNotPerfect20. but well done and keep up the good work. hope to see some more poems from you xoxo

This one is a sad feeling like you've been trying to be in yet nobody understand and somehow like you...very well written. Keep it up

I agree with 'Ice "Forgotten phoenix" ' They summed it all up for me.
Well done though.
Keep writting,
Elaine.

NIce beginning, just keep writing and you will improve in fractions of seconds. The flow and wordings are beautiful. Tc

That's so sad! :'( but I love it!!I wish it was longer though.5/5^-^

<3Amber

Ooh sad...v.v i like it though... it sorta reminds meh of meh, cuz at meh moms house, its not like a home...>.> but great job! this ish going in meh favs! 5/5!!!

plz check out my poems!!
~*~Skye~*~

It was a sad depressing poem. but i thought anyways over and over again was a little annoying. but other than that, i loved it. great work 5/5

This was a wonderful poem. Great flow of words again. And i can relate to it very much. 5/5 from me.
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