This is very well written... I loved it, I loved every bit og it.. I hope you conitnue to write more...

Wow.
I really liked this one tooo, dear.
It's quite amazing.
not what I expected it to be, of course. Lol.
It's absolutely amazing.
ONETHING;
realize you are alone.
^^ that kinda messes up the flow, maybe try you're?
idk why. maybe syllable count? I didn't see if that was why, but it's only one syllable, so you wouldn't think that...
Lol.
Anywho.

Good job.
5/5

Astonishing. I really, really liked this piece; it brings into play certain satirical words of comfort, which sarcastically disheartens the mocked "rose". In fact, I find it quite nerve-wracking with its angst approach.

However, the part where you've stated, "...you've not many left--", didn't particularly flow well with the others. Perhaps it's just me, though...

Anyway. A pleasure to read, nevertheless. :] 5/5

Best wishes,
Marian

Wow... that was real encouraging!

i liked it though. your poetic voice is something that makes your poetry unique, and fun to read.

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crazygonuts.

This poem flowed greatly and was one of the best acrostics i read by far on this site. 5/5 It was very enjoyable.

When i first read the title for this poem, I must admit that I was expecting something along the lines of someone speaking of close loved one that they had lost to suicide. Haha, you fooled me and probably many others. I enjoy that your title in itself is a mockery of the true meaning of your poem. The flow was beautiful as were the words you conveyed to help bring out the intentions of your poem. I do think that this poem would be better if read aloud though. Great write.

CrazyGoNuts

Stumbling on your thorns--
With what hope is there left;
Eternity doesn't seem that long..
Eventually you'll realize you're alone.
There. Doesn't that feel better?

Wow great, Acrostic style is totally present in this piece. Very well penned and well written. 5/5 all the way

Stumbling on your thorns--
With what hope is there left;
Eternity doesn't seem that long..
Eventually you'll realize you're alone.
There. Doesn't that feel better?

Wow great, Acrostic style is totally present in this piece. Very well penned and well written. 5/5 all the way

This poem I have read once before. Truely a beautiful piece. It is on my favorite poems as I loved it so much. I had never seen an acrostic which held repetition so it really caught my attention. The emotion portrayed was astonishing. I honestly can't say how heartfelt this piece was for me. Delicate. Well done. 5/5. ~Mel

This poem I have read once before. Truely a beautiful piece. It is on my favorite poems as I loved it so much. I had never seen an acrostic which held repetition so it really caught my attention. The emotion portrayed was astonishing. I honestly can't say how heartfelt this piece was for me. Delicate. Well done. 5/5. ~Mel