Comments : The One I Love.

  • 11 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I must say that this was such a beautifully written poem. I found this piece fo be so very deep and touching. You expressed the way you feel within depth of this poem which really gave this poem raw emotions. Word choice was simple yet effective. A stunning piece I must say. I'm sure the person who you wrote this poem for must be so special to you. Well done on writing such a great poem. Keep up the good work. 5/5 ~mel

  • 11 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    This was so sweet. A very good read.. Great Job.. I thought the flow was perfect.. this has to be one of my favorite poems.. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Fsams

    This is a superb poem with great flow of feelings and expressions of pure love and affection. I loved the total poem. tc

  • 11 years ago

    by ABake

    This was beautiful.
    Your flow was so smooth and your emotion was deep and touching as the others said.
    Your portray your love so easily and with such simple wording.
    Great job!
    5/5

    XxAmberxX

  • 11 years ago

    by Prophecies In Kodak

    You had wonderful flow, and vocabulary, nice form. All of the things i look for.
    I infact enjoyed this on many levels.
    I've read some of your other work, and you have remarkable talent.
    Keep all of it up.

    Isaac.
    (Ian)

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Ohh..I don't even know what to say...

    I LOVE this...the emotion and depth you portrayed in this piece were beautifully done, very easily sensed by the reader, flow was perfect throughout and I thought the opening was beautiful with each stanza thereafter just getting better and better.

  • 10 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Awww...i have to say...this is one of the best love poems that i've read in a very long time... kudos to you.=]

    the second stanza was brilliant. nice work. 5/5