I must say that this was such a beautifully written poem. I found this piece fo be so very deep and touching. You expressed the way you feel within depth of this poem which really gave this poem raw emotions. Word choice was simple yet effective. A stunning piece I must say. I'm sure the person who you wrote this poem for must be so special to you. Well done on writing such a great poem. Keep up the good work. 5/5 ~mel
You had wonderful flow, and vocabulary, nice form. All of the things i look for.
I infact enjoyed this on many levels.
I've read some of your other work, and you have remarkable talent.
Keep all of it up.
I LOVE this...the emotion and depth you portrayed in this piece were beautifully done, very easily sensed by the reader, flow was perfect throughout and I thought the opening was beautiful with each stanza thereafter just getting better and better.