WOW that was very good flow was nice, great choice of words and well written, but it has a twist to it, very nice indeed, love it, a challenge to the mind, great write , keep it up,,,, your friend Tracy d
Great poem! 5/5! are you buddhist? i noticed your picture on your profile. i think i might be, but i dont know enough about it to consider myself buddhist. i agree with a lot of their teachings, nonetheless.maybe if you are buddhist you can tell me a little more about it.