Love Is A Fog

by Angela   Jul 27, 2007


There is a girl in the forest,
she is asleep,
and she doesn't know it,
but a fog rolls upon her,
it caresses her,
it kisses her skin,
and hugs her tight,
so bliss is the girl
as she breaths in the fog,
it consumes her inner being,
and chills her soul,
she doesn't know
but the fog is already killing her,
already dissolving her sweet soul,
love is a fog, life is a forest

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  • 11 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Wonderful metaphor!! It's absolutely beautiful. You have a great talent when it come to word usage. It was a very pleasant poem to read. 5/5

    marcella

    • 4 years ago

      by Angela

      Thank you! It is so nice to come back years later and read my old poems and comments!

  • 11 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    You write like me in some ways. A wonderful poem. I enjoy your writing.

  • 11 years ago

    by azii

    Great poem.
    It's so true..
    Loved it .
    5/5
    Keep up the great job.

  • 11 years ago

    by Debbie

    Gosh, Angela, you have a way with words. :) It's a huge metaphorical piece.

    "so bliss is the girl
    as she breaths in the fog,
    it consumes her inner being,
    and chills her soul,"

    If love is the fog, how wonderful! You write so elegantly for such a short piece. It's so sweet and delightful to read. Honest. I hope you keep on writing.

    Take care,
    Marian

    • 4 years ago

      by Angela

      Thank you! It is so nice to come back years later and read my old poems and comments!

  • 11 years ago

    by ABake

    This was really cute. Although no flow, it was still a great peice!
    5/5
    ((Amber))