Your Bullying Me

by Esther   Aug 6, 2007


Your bullying me,
Your breaking my soul,
And in my heart you will leave a hole
A hole so big,
A hole so wide
I will feel like I could just die,
But I will survive
And I will move on,
Then I'll be number 1.
I will pity you as you walk by,
For then it will be you who wants to die.

This poem was not rushed...its meant to be like a mantra. To help people out who are being bullied.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    This poem is okay. I know at the end you said the poem wasn't rushed but it seems like it is. It's not mean't to be slow, i know that..but it's just too fast. I liked the topic though, of bullying. To improve this poem I think you need better vocabulary.

    -Shannon <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This poem seemed a little rushed to me. I did like the meaning behind it but it seemed to go to fast. A few better words to strength this piece would create alot better emotions. None the less an interested piece. ~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by SuicideQueen

    Cute poem, in that it was short, sweet and straight to the point, and on top of that, it had a rhyme, loved it 5/5 x

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