Comments : Wishing Star [Triquatrain]

  • 10 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Great poem. I liked the topic and poetry form. I've done a quatrain before but I never thought of doing a triquatrain. "Cries for ends of mourn and strife" <---- favourite line. 5/5

    -Shannon <3

  • 10 years ago

    by TracyM

    I like it. its unique, and certainly different. i like the style and the use of words you have chosen.

    xx trace

  • 10 years ago

    by Kaila

    Very very strong vocabulary
    i loved it
    it drew a very vivid image
    nice work
    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

    HUH... Cool Poem... I like it :D

  • 10 years ago

    by Wallace

    Very good, I like the style its very interesting. I made a triquatrain poem too, check it out if you want. Yea, great poem.

  • 10 years ago

    by Spirit

    This is a nice poem but i think that it should be part of the nature poems
    over all though great job.

  • 10 years ago

    by lish

    Really well done you definately have a unique talent for this

  • 10 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    For such a confining style it's an awesome poem. Your descriptions are awesome! I love this poem, it's actually sounds quite delicate but yet is so strong. I give you kudo's for writing in a style, because it's something I'm not very good at. Well 5/5 for me for sure. ^^

    Much Love,
    .:Danielle:.

  • 10 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    I've never seen anything like this before! It's fabulous! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Blissful

    Beautiful piece of poerty you have here. The language was flawless and the style you choose was great. My favorite stanza had to be the second one. It was filled with emotion. Well done *5/5*

  • 10 years ago

    by gack60

    Even tho the structure was not the average type i enjoyed reading it, it can be taken in numerous different ways, and im sure to every reader it will portray a different meaning.

    Very well done on this one!!

    5/5