This was awesome! An awesome use of vocabulary and I was really drawn into your work. Amazing job on making this sound so distinguished and the form you used was great. Absolutely loved this great job.
This poem is written very well you have a unique style and your poems have a lot of emotion however I fell the title could have been given a little more. Your poem proves that you are a very accomplished poet which unfortunately makes your title a seam a little clumsy.
An other great poem of yours.
I've heard of this form before, I wanted to try it sometimes myself, but it seems so difficult.
But you did a great job.
A good flow and a good word choice.
I really enjoyed reading it.
I look forward to read more of your work.
Honestly i'm not familiar with the different types of poems but i can say that this one is so amazing and caught my interest..v great work it flow smoothly can't find any flaws in here. I admire your chosen words it on how it jive with the intense emotions held in every lines. Great job!!
I thought the poem was written so very well and I can't believe this poem isn't 5/5 overall. Not only the word choice but the imagery alone is outstanding. Truly one of your better writes 5/5 by far GG23
I like this poem its very well...honestly i think you tried to hard to make this poem what it is....very nice poem just seems more like something you had to write not something that came from the heart...but it was good i did like it...Manda