Dance, Dance my child
Dark, Daunting, Wild
Sleep, Sleep my son
Life but just begun.
this was full of something unspoken and said but you could feel a message or something! i really loved and enjoyed this poem! this is defienently a 5/5
It is a nicely-written, engaging read. The seeming correlation of the gustiness of the winds of trials and challenges to an emotional outburst truly capture my interest in the poem. At first I took it as one of the consequences of premarital sex: single-parenthood, whereas it could be interpreted in every way possible. The pitch was poignant and emotions refined and well conveyed. I truly enjoyed this piece, Leah. All the best!
This poem is breathtaking, the flow was flawless, and the wording amazing.
I can't explain how this poem made me feel, almost like it will always go unspoken.
And excellent Write,
And a memorable read,
11 years ago
Oh wow! I love this poem. And Im not just saying that. I hope I can write as good as you one day. 5/5
This is one of the best poems I have read and I always try and leave honest comments I would love it if you could pm me some time so that we could talk about where you get ur insperation from as I would be really intrested flawless poem i'm adding you to my favorites list.
Wow..That was really deep. I don't usually comment on dark poems, but this one was magnificent. I was captivated from the beginning of the poem to the end. You really dug deep down in your dark space, lol. I really loved reading this.
Wow! Your poem is so vivid and so strong!! Very dramatic, and a pleasing read, despite the confusion i experienced over the specific topic at first. I love it! Wonderful ideas, elquent writting skills, simply beautiful. Fantastic!