Comments : Hawksong

  • 11 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Yay im the first to

    nice poem..i really like it..the flow was good and they rhyming is great....wonderful choice of words...and the ending is my favorite part.

    nicely done...5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by LovexMe

    Great poem. Nice choice of words [liket he other person said].
    This was my favourite part :
    "The change ends to a wondrous hawksong --
    Spread powerful, golden brown wings,
    To feel the hidden glory of flight
    And the sweet release from humanity".
    i could just imagine it.


  • 11 years ago

    by stefanie

    Wow. i could never write a piece like this. it was great. an amazing piece of work. like stated before, you used a wonderful choice of words. great job.

  • 11 years ago

    by Nix

    Wow!!! I am proud of you, this poem is written greatly. This piece has incredible atmosphere and every stanza is powerful. Your first fantasy poem is excellent, I think that this is your best poem on the site. Your talent improving...I am truly impressed!!!
    Well done! You should write more fantasy poem because this one is amazing. It really deserves 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Reminders Torture

    AMAZING......Wonderful choice of words.....Excellent...Every stanza was perfect...And the rhyming was good too....
    Take care <3

  • 11 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Great poem. Excellent choice of words and greatly written. This poem has a marvelous flow and the rhyming was great too. 5/5.

    -Shannon <3

  • 11 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    This poem was beautiful, you did not force the rhyming at all and made the flow great! this was a beautiful piece i loved it 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Let me say I am quite impressed with this piece. Truely amazing. The word choice was strong and vivd creating such beautiful imagery played throughout my mind. Youwent into great depth to explain this poem and I liked the fantasy outcome you have given upon the reader. This poem of course deserves a 5/5 no less. Keep up the good work if I keep reading more pieces like this for you your bound to get onto my favorites. Well done ~mel

  • 11 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    This is pretty impresive. You created wonderful imagery with such detailed descriptions. It was quite beautiful, and pleasant to read. The flow and choice of words were outstanding. Great read. 5/5


  • 11 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Desciptively Penned!
    It was beautiful, and I really enjoyed it.
    The imagery was amazing.
    And overall the peice was just Splendid:)

    Keep it up,

  • 11 years ago

    by RobinAnn13

    That book is so good and the poem fits it wonderfully. Very, very good poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by TwiztidJuggalette

    That was a really good choice of words for this piece...I really enjoyed reading it....Very good poem...


  • 11 years ago

    by Adelle

    You said this is the first fantasy piece you have written in which case I only have one thing to say you have a gift keep wrighting fantasy this is exalent very well worded. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    Wow it was gr8..u sure do know how to put ur thoughts into words:D
    keep it up now:D
    tk care

  • 11 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, I love it. Excellently written, with so captivating and amazing imagery. You have great wording through the whole piece. I like everything about this poem, from the beginning to the ending.
    Well done, 5/5 from me

  • 11 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

    Nice poem...

  • 11 years ago

    by Wallace

    That was a really good poem. I liked your creativity. Good job, keep it up.

  • 11 years ago

    by lonley

    I love the book and this poem was..amazing i LOVE IT!!

  • 11 years ago

    by TamborineMan

    Unique subject matter. I felt that the verbiage sometimes over the top for the emotions they were attempting to convey. Interesting piece and overall imagery

  • 11 years ago

    by White Chocolate Dynamite

    Very nice, all around it was superb. Very good word choice.Keep it up!