Great poem. Nice choice of words [liket he other person said].
This was my favourite part :
"The change ends to a wondrous hawksong --
Spread powerful, golden brown wings,
To feel the hidden glory of flight
And the sweet release from humanity".
i could just imagine it.
Wow!!! I am proud of you, this poem is written greatly. This piece has incredible atmosphere and every stanza is powerful. Your first fantasy poem is excellent, I think that this is your best poem on the site. Your talent improving...I am truly impressed!!!
Well done! You should write more fantasy poem because this one is amazing. It really deserves 5/5
Let me say I am quite impressed with this piece. Truely amazing. The word choice was strong and vivd creating such beautiful imagery played throughout my mind. Youwent into great depth to explain this poem and I liked the fantasy outcome you have given upon the reader. This poem of course deserves a 5/5 no less. Keep up the good work if I keep reading more pieces like this for you your bound to get onto my favorites. Well done ~mel
Wow, I love it. Excellently written, with so captivating and amazing imagery. You have great wording through the whole piece. I like everything about this poem, from the beginning to the ending.
Well done, 5/5 from me