Wow, what an inspiring piece.
The flow was spot on and the message you were telling was such a good one.
This is something people really need to think seriously about and to thank for what they have
Well done
5/5
*gem*

WOW i like this one... really a good and brilliant poem... keep up... i give you 5/5 for your masterpiece...

WOW i like this one... really a good and brilliant poem... keep up... i give you 5/5 for your masterpiece...

The construction and style are fantastic. And it has such a deep meaning and emotion, one can really feel this upon reading it. This is simply an excellent poem.

Tammy
This is a very hard issue for me to deal with...If I could take all the homeless in or had the money to build a shelter I would...some might can help it but so many have no family, health issues and just a lot of things going on where they can't help theirselves....truly a brilliant piece and it touches the heart....big hugs, Ann

Nicely Penned!!!

Very good poem, and a simple truth, to many can't replace the one in need with them self. We have a "it can't happen to me mentality" or a "it's their fault" I loved the poem Tammy.

Very good poem, and a simple truth, to many can't replace the one in need with them self. We have a "it can't happen to me mentality" or a "it's their fault" I loved the poem Tammy.

Nice food for thought, Tammy..people so love to turn away from misery, until it comes knocking on their own door..then it's a totally different situation, off course!

Well done,

5/5 Ingrid

Very well thought out and written. I don’t agree with the spitting at feet though as I think it’s more apathy from most people. Your poem rings true though, that the down trodden are rarely helped. Maybe one day the helpers will outnumber the treaders... hopefully