This just jumps off the screen and scream out to the world! It is awesome!

A very strong and yet equally important message that must be told over and over again.

We all must stop, unite, and bring an end to all the prejudice in this world if we are ever going to live in complete freedom.

The fact that you continue to remind the reader that you are human makes the poems screem louder and even more powerful.

I can actually see you standing there at a podium and giving a speech while standing for the rights of those who fall victems to this horrid crime of hatred.

Well done!

--Sher

I think you're generalising the non-muslim population, are you trying to say that non-muslim girls all show their boobs? And get their asses checked out? If you have suffered from racism, I'm sorry for that, but I don't think it means you should generalise and stereotype in return. That's lowering yourself to a racist person's point of view.

However, I see what you're trying to say. Well written

=)

"I cover my body
To get respect"

people always ask me why i wear baggy clothes. this part of your poem answers that.
great job.

Mm. i liked this. i never really put much thought into why muslims choose to wear the traditional clothing in the us. now that youve wrote about it, i understand it. i like the idea. i was just talking to a guy today, whos somewhat of a friend, and i learned he seriously checks out my behind, and it made me really uncomfortable. and thats just learning that via IM. =]

well anyway. i think this poem is great.

Great poem, beautiful flow and structure. Very powerful message about your heritage! Keep it up! Love Greta, Talk soon. xo

Well done my dear sister
muslims should always be proud of themselve

What you are saying is true, what is the use of wearing clothes that are revealing and expect people to respect.

I have no more words to say. your poem is very good my sister.