Wow that was..wow..? it's horrible how guys will get with one girl telling them what they want to hear then leave them for someone else..it's just plain sick. good poem though.

amandaxx.

Wow, that was incredible yet disturbing. well written but if that ever truly happened it would bother me so much i'd knock him out with a frying pan, lol. good job

This sad.. but it show how guys can such jerks... great poem though

Ouch...dang I'm sorry that any guy would do that to you =( Guys can be real jerks sometimes *to put it VERY mild lols* That was a great expression of your feelings and what you went through ^_^ It's better to write it all then keep it inside ~_~ Another 5/5
Rhea

Wow
i hope this didn't really happen to you! something like this almost happened to me, but thank God, i didn't get pregnant.
this was very well written. simple, yet captivating. sometimes i'll just glance over a poem but i couldn't with this one!! incredable...

5/5