Beautifully written love poem, with great imagery and good choice of words. You expressed emotions in it excellently. The ending is very captivating and effective (the last stanza)
My favorite stanza is:
-Something that just wasn't worth the effort
The countless disappointments
Weighing down the fragile heart
When something that felt like love
Turned out to be a sham
A red herring-
Awehh..I loved this ! The poem was full of imagery, especially the first stanza..and it really was written well. Love is very hard to find, and you have written out that journey well lol, glad you got him !
Wow im not one for poems that don't rhyme....but you exspressed this so beautifully and i love the message you gave out...by the end of the poem i got goosebumps and not a lot of poems do that for me....well this one is definetly going to my favourites...keep up the great work your doing great 5/5:)
Amazing Gem! So glad for you to write again. This piece was different than your others, but amazing with it's metaphors and comparisons...good flow to it too. Sometimes with free verse, I too, find it hard on how to break up the words into stanzas, but you did it beautifully! Great job!
I LOVED this line
Nailing jelly to a tree
How amazing in imagery that was. Plus, it was original and sort of funny and sweet! Just perfect!
As always your poems are amazing! :) That guy must be really lucky to have you :) I really love the 1st two lines in this poem.. I think it really grabs the reader's attention :)
What I also love in this poem is the title :) it really is beautiful..
5/5 as always.
Please keep writing!
Thanks for the comment :)
I loved this poem...its kinda like the one i wrote "love is real"...check it out please...but yea i loved this poem (especially the parts "Nailing jelly to a tree" and "When you cease looking
It springs out of nowhere
Like a long lost friend" because i love it when that happens). you always have great poems...kepp them coming