IT went in so many diffent dirictions a little
hard to follow but still worth reading 5/5

This poem is a bit hard to understand but i think it is realli good ♥

I liked this. it was unlike anything i have read b4. sometimes it kinda went off track but i all in all deff. a good poem. i loved it!!

O my..wow..I had to reread the last lines the first time because I was confused...waiting for something bad to happen to the mother..I guess it did it just wasn't what I was expecting-it fit even better in this poem. Wonderful write,sad life(poem)