WOW!!!! I LOVE IT!!! so beautifully written! Glorious imagery! read it three times! LOVED the lines:
The sky no longer weeps.
The colors are found and aligned
So descriptive! you have a unique style, that it is easy to read and captivating! The vocab you use is flawlessly chosen and obviously well thought out!
I'm VERY impressed! this one's going straight to my favorites.
Your description of the setting really makes the poem interesting and makes you mentally visualize what you are writing! Great job! and by the way thank you for commenting me on my poem. I cant wait to see what other poems you have =)
Wonderful poem , twisted a little , but well written and choice of words , was simply great , your talent is excellent , I loved this one , it was great , and a pleasure to read, keep it up , your friend Tracy d 5/5