Comments : Life and Lies of Your POPULAR Teenager

  • 10 years ago

    by Miu

    Aww that last bit made me smile :) Really like reading just simple poems that just ryhmed great and are so cute that way:) Enjoyed it! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    As long as this was written in good fun my dear... it flowed very well and has a great sense of arrogance about it.

    I like the cockiness...

    --Sher

  • 10 years ago

    by Shauna

    Lol, cute.. the flow is nice.. great poem girl!

    5.5**
    <33

  • 10 years ago

    by Veamm

    Excellent!

    Very cool, i like your style!
    For me school sucks! do much work and naive teachers..I'm irritated with them..

    well nicely done!

    keep it up!

  • 10 years ago

    by broken reflection

    Ha ha ha, very cool, nicely done {2 thumbs up} 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by michael

    I know what u mean by being board but i still think its a very good poem!!

  • 10 years ago

    by On Cupids Bad Side

    That's sort of mean, but it rhymed vell!!
    Good job.

  • 10 years ago

    by darkenlight1

    I don't know what I think about it

  • 10 years ago

    by ash

    This is interresting

  • 10 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    Very good poem. it was quick and to the point. flowed nicely. i rate this a 5. keep up the good work!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    Lol. made me laugh! starts out kinda serious... but ends up more lighthearted!
    well written i really like your work. its not the kind of thing i would usually like but somehow you make me want to read more!!!

    keep up the hard work!!!

    Love
    Jacs
    xxxx

  • 10 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Good poem. I hope you're not this arrogant :P. It wasn't that funny but the ending made me smile. The flow was off a bit but I like how you structured it.

    Good job

    -Shannon <3

  • 10 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Haha.
    If this one wasn't under funny..
    it would have made it better.
    I would have laughed so much.
    Conceited people are the best.

    I loved the flow.
    This one was deff. deserving of a 5.

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Hahaha i love this. i liked how it started somewhat serious and them became light hearted as you got into the poem. good flow throughout and the ending made me giggle.

  • 10 years ago

    by Sweet Fragility

    HAHA. Made me smile. =) It's nice, and is probably true for some people (Hopefully not you. JK) Anyway, great job, and the flow is good too.)
    ~ Lainey

  • 10 years ago

    by bella

    Cute!

  • 10 years ago

    by Jstuckie

    Nice poem i enjoyed it

    comment back :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Jstuckie

    W0W THiS iS G00D
    Y0U WRiTE VERY WELL
    ;]
    -MiCHELLE
    {5/5}
    *(C0MMENT BACK)*

  • 10 years ago

    by Hermosa

    Good job...very funny

  • 10 years ago

    by AmberKaz

    Lmfao!! Prep much? xD Nah, awesome poem it made me smile. Thanks. =]