Comments : Endless Sparkle [Haiku]

  • 10 years ago

    by Roxiee An

    So nice
    Loved it
    5/5
    keep it up

  • 10 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This Haiku seems to be astronomically profound. The colloquial wording enhances this style of poetry.
    I believe this Haiku could be interpreted many ways. The endless sparkle is a paradoxical illusion that we may only observe in the earths shadow. The stars that are personified in a metaphorical competition are huge heavenly bodies of varying distances, yet the moon seems more fabulous because of our closeness to it. The day can be twenty-four hours yet is perceived as the opposite of night. When we are blinded by the light of the star that is our sun is impossible the view all points of light as we vainly perceive our tiny planet as the center of the universe all night, all day long

  • 10 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    I usually don't like nature poems, but this one I really enjoyed! it was beautiful. I got images and I really like it. You packed a lot of power into a little poem dear.
    Great job!
    5.5
    <3
    Ciao

  • 10 years ago

    by Boy

    Aww. i Dnt know the haiku poems meaning. But it seems me a nice poem 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Well done Laura:)
    Im never disapointed in your work, your effort is always at its top.
    A vey beautiful and metaphoric haiku.

    5/5 for a job well done.
    -- Elly.

  • 10 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    I usually don't like short poems but I love this style. Haikus are brilliant. In such few words you've been able to say so much. I loved the imagery in this and it flowed really well. 5/5

    Take Care!

    -Shannon <3

  • 10 years ago

    by Kristina

    Wow this haiku is very good. i really like it a lot. it was really great. i like what it was about. 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 10 years ago

    by cory

    That was great i loved it very expressive.

    Cory

  • 10 years ago

    by Sweet Fragility

    First of all, the title is brillant. Original and leaves readers wondering what the poem's about. Anyway, great job, managing to be very descriptive in such a short piece.
    Keep it up 5/5
    ~ Lainey

  • 10 years ago

    by Veamm

    Excellent!

    honestly i don't have any idea in haiku type of poetry, but i think this one expressed well, its topic!

    keep it up!

  • 10 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    I liked this haiku it was unique 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Nix

    Beautifully written Haiku, very original and you created great atmosphere with just few words. Imagery is also excellent. Well done!

  • 10 years ago

    by Gem

    You're right about Haiku's. Those three lines always manage to say so much
    This one created such fabulous imagery for me!
    It was perfect
    5.5
    *Gem*

  • 9 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    It is really a gift when you are able to express yourself with very few words. You can.
    Great job!

    5/5 for you sweetie

    Take care,

    Ingrid

  • 9 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    I havnt read a haiku, or a nature poem in a while. Youve made me realise what i love about them. *smiles*.
    I think that you have so much meaning in this. Haiku's are meant to hold strong meanings but its soemtimes hard to see.
    Good usage of discription - it created excellent imagery.
    An amazing read - sorry for the short ocmment but i do not know what else to say. Keep writing! :)
    x

  • 9 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Mhhh, I love Haiku's:)
    Beautiful write and a lovely subject.

    take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 9 years ago

    by Aryaan

    I like nature poems. And I liked this one too. Well written.