Excellent!

I can feel the emotions, and sadness and emptiness from your words. Very breath taking!

keep it up!

This is a great poem. You wrote it beautifully.

I can really feel the emotions and everything. i really like this A LOT. i can also relate to it too so thats another reason why i like it so much! keep it up!

BabyGurl

Wow! This has plenty of strong qualities! 5/5

I really like this powm and its longer than mine :p

Great poem. Lots of emotion and very relatable to everyone and anyone. The flow was okay but overall it was a good poem.

I love this poem it gave me goosebumps just reading it.. It's as if I saw the pain 5/5

The emotion is well-expressed in this piece. The flow was a little off in the smaller stanzas, but nonetheless it was a very powwerful read. 5/5

marcella

Not my type of poem. I prefer things that rhyme or things that are very very descriptive, and it helps if I have a connection to the poem. Since you didn't rate on the one you thought wasn't my best I'll do the same for you. I'd give this one maybe a three or a 2.

Aww this is an icy, breath taking piece. Sends shivers down your spine when you imagine it. Its scary to be holding the blade. Fantastic poem! 5/5

Although i enjoy poems that rhyme more then poems that don't this poem was still filled with raw energy and an unsteady emotion. whatever draws you to write a poem in emotion will generally make an original or fantastic idea.

Although your rhythm wasn't steady through out i find this piece unusual and original so ill give you a 5 because im sick of the same poems i read everyday.

keep smilin' kiddo and know that I will be here if you need to tlak or vent rather then tkaing it out on your beautiful skin that your mother blessed you with.
:)

Wow it was soo vivid and sooo sad..u really got me with this poem..great great job..and thanks soo much for commenting/voting on my poem!
take care

Angela

I really like it, I can relate so much to it.

I hope you don't feel this way :( it's really sad when I see people trying to end their life.

Anyway the flow was smooth, good job.