Comments : The ideal master teacher (sonnet)

  • 10 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    This is wonderful dedication to that person that you described through the poem. The flow of this piece is great, and you picked good rhyming scheme and form.
    Keep writing! :)

  • 10 years ago

    by CompletelyIncomplete

    Lovely poem Fsams. This poem shows true admiration to a teacher and it is very well written. The rhymes are very well. 5.5 for the beautiful write.

  • 10 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Great job! You describe plenty in your rhymes! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Teria

    Hmm.
    ". . . I worth them all. . . " << That doesn't make much sense? If you mean something by it and it's meant to be that way, please let me know what it means. Lol. :|

    Last stanza : "Who've" << Should be "Who's" , meaning; who has. instead of who have.

    OKAY, this is a great, great poem. Honest to God. A few mistakes, but the flow is great. Along with the, quite sweet, meaning. There's depth to it, and it's a good terse poem.

    Keep it up, darling.

  • 10 years ago

    by Boy

    Wow oooooooo. what a nice poem. i loved it. great great work 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    Very well writtin. i enjoed reading this very much. i rated this a 5

  • 10 years ago

    by Ashlee Nicole

    Wow this ones really good too!

  • 10 years ago

    by Tiffany

    This is a really great poem, i reckon you used the sonnet form reli well!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by DeadandBleeding

    This is so good, i love the language you've used, i think it makes the poem flow really well. The choice of form is also excellent.
    DnB

  • 10 years ago

    by Jiyaa

    This poem is really beautiful.
    It shows love to some one important and special. I must agree with all that all in all this one is 5/5

    This is very nice and
    best I would say. I wonder who hav downvoted it :o

    With love
    Jiya

  • 10 years ago

    by nikki

    I think i r/r/c'd this once before but not according to the comments, so i'll do it now, i thought it was a wonderful piece and in every poem i read, you prove me right over and over, i hope you showed her this poem, it was sweet. 5/5

    nikki

  • 10 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    ========= 50tH poeM==========

    CONGRATULATIONS............. fsam

    i c manY thrillinG commentS narrateD aS abovE and itS perfectlY correcT. nO wondeR itS neaT anD expresseD iN a speciaL manneR, soundS betteR anD nO wondeR youR writingS deservE anD tO bE placeD iN a speciaL placE...

    tO thiS 50tH poeM, mY deepesT greetingS tO yoU.... wheN yoU wilL reacH tO thE 100tH writinG... i wilL certainlY givE yoU morE wihseS thaN thiS.

    thankS 4 writinG.... thankS 4 sincere feelingS...thankS 4 nice worK outS... thankS 4 youR sinceritY iN doinG attractivE soundS... welL donE deaR.....keeP uP youR gooD workS anD dO morE foR ouR smilinG!

    luzaN nazeeR

  • 10 years ago

    by Spirit

    This is a good poem

    i was confused by the saying
    I worth them all

    i didn't know what that ment but i'm not the writter
    again good job

  • 10 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    I love this. To me it seems simple, yet deep. Good flow and the rhyme doesn't seem forced. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Wallace

    Excellent poem. Very strong emotions and your flow was amazing. Although I didnt really get the ending, I thought it could have been more creative. But very good anyway. Good job 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Robert

    This was a good poem I think there has always been two types of poems one for the public and one for families and friend those of more of a personal nature. I beleive this to be a personal poem. It was very enjoyable Plot121

  • 10 years ago

    by chind

    This poem was really sweet.
    the flow was nice and so was your ryhming.
    i loved the whole thing, from the beginnging to the end.

    5/5
    cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by Blissful

    I loved this! It flowed so beautfiully and I could really relate. When a teacher really reaches out to you, its wonderful. Well done *5/5*

  • 10 years ago

    by Shinobi

    The last stanza is the best here. The structure of the sonnet was kept here perfectly. The rhymes and choosing of words fit the subject. An excellent poem no doubt 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Hebe

    Love this one.
    Seems the person you discrbe is very special to you, so you made yourself very clear, that's good.
    Very sweet you wrote it for her. A lucky person.
    Nice words and good flow.
    Enjoyed reading it.
    Take care