Plight of the human

by Lenny   Oct 29, 2007


Blood
Is pumping
Is this like sense?
Jumping in a
Snow-globe
Snow-cone
Hailstorm?

Air is transforming
Dilapidated
Sucked in
And spat out
A jet plane
Woops was that a bird?

And dialogue is foaming
Or is that vomit
Forming on these lips
Parading from this mouth

Floating
Pumping
Transforming
Is this the plight of the human?

Are we snow-globe
Trapped
Jet-plane blind
And speaking
Venom. . .

Or is that just you?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    A good one. Very thoughtful. Strong messages... Nice!

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Very powerful, filled with vivid descriptions that made this deep piece even better.
    It is very original, uniqueness shines out from every stanza, which left great impression on me. I've never read something like this before.
    You have a way with words.
    Truly interesting read.
    Keep up!
    5/5