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by Jesyka Vendetta
:/ that was pretty good! quite saddening but good
by Lady betty
by Loved In Hell
Wow so sad but i have said many times before "sadness makes a gret subject" especially heartbreak i reallky enjoyed reading it! 5/5
Love it! Just love it! Keep Its Up!
well done. xxx
I like the ending;
Very nice poem xx
by ECILA ice
This is too long and i appresiatedthat you have lots of ideas and you've shown some vivid emotions. and honestly, it hit my heart and i like it though i know you can still work this thing and make it more beautiful.. anyway this is nice. keep it up!
by waiting 4 some1
Wow so sad and hurting poem, i sympathize with you my friend...may Allah bless you
I really liked your poem i was thinking maybe you could read some of mine and comment me on them
I liike it....but there was a couple lines that seems forced but it was rele good!!!
by Sweet lig
Aww its was sad piece.. and it well flowed nice keep it up
by Silent Screams
I cried!!! *Sniffle* I loved it and it is touching and so...Real...T-T
Keep writing! I love your work!!!
This one lost me with in the first 6 lines. It was hard for my dislexic eyes to follow. Sorry.
by The Queen
Good job...best hopes and wishes...
It actually opened some wounds I've persistently held closed and covered for some years - so I can't say anything else but good job. It is very well written.