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  • 9 years ago

    by Jesyka Vendetta

    :/ that was pretty good! quite saddening but good

  • 9 years ago

    by Lady betty

    Soooo nice!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Wow so sad but i have said many times before "sadness makes a gret subject" especially heartbreak i reallky enjoyed reading it! 5/5

    laura

  • 9 years ago

    by Anisa

    Love it! Just love it! Keep Its Up!

  • 9 years ago

    by InterviewWithTheKat

    Very beautiful!
    well done. xxx

  • 9 years ago

    by sexyCheckers

    I like the ending;
    Very nice poem xx

  • 9 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    This is too long and i appresiatedthat you have lots of ideas and you've shown some vivid emotions. and honestly, it hit my heart and i like it though i know you can still work this thing and make it more beautiful.. anyway this is nice. keep it up!

  • 9 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Wow so sad and hurting poem, i sympathize with you my friend...may Allah bless you

  • 9 years ago

    by yasmeen

    I really liked your poem i was thinking maybe you could read some of mine and comment me on them

  • 9 years ago

    by Christina

    I liike it....but there was a couple lines that seems forced but it was rele good!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Aww its was sad piece.. and it well flowed nice keep it up

  • 9 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    *Tear*
    I cried!!! *Sniffle* I loved it and it is touching and so...Real...T-T

    Keep writing! I love your work!!!
    5/5

    ~Ally

  • 9 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    This one lost me with in the first 6 lines. It was hard for my dislexic eyes to follow. Sorry.

  • 9 years ago

    by The Queen

    Good job...best hopes and wishes...

  • 9 years ago

    by Rin

    It actually opened some wounds I've persistently held closed and covered for some years - so I can't say anything else but good job. It is very well written.