Ahhww..touching!

Ahhww..touching!

Wow great poem and I so know where u r coming from love it 5/5

Tammi,

Interesting. I like the flow and rhyme they were right on. The "I MISS YOU" really pounded that in the readers head. I kind of wished the last stanza had more of a punch to it like the rest of the piece, but all the same, it was well written.
*ME*

I thought this poem was easy to connect to emotionally, the breaks were good and the concept was too.

You really love this girl. It shows in each poem more and more as i read them.
Your feelings are so unbelieveable and sensitive.
I enjoy the storyline you put into them as well.
They make me smile, and know im not the only one going through this.
:)
Your simply amazing.;)
and im glad i can relate to you and your poems.

---Tay<3

That was so sweet, and im totally in that position lol, but i thought it was a great poem. there were so many wonderful things about it, and it was just an overall fantastic poem. great write. 5*5
Kimberly

Very well written..and now dats what exactly "i miss you" means..

This poem is so sad, and I'm sorry you ever felt that way, but you did a very very good job of expressing yourself in this poem 5/5

I love the whole lines seems sweet and sad piece but it was sincerely well expressed all the deep emotions.. the style was absolutly impressive and wonderful 5/5

The repetitions is very effective. Whole poem is filled with amount of truly touching, heartfelt emotions.
This piece is filled with sadness described from the heart, truly sincere which made it even more overwhelming.
I can't chose my favorite part, whole poem is great.

Keep up!

: ( very sad poem you did a great job with it though 5/5 <33

This is another beautiful poem, but sad. This one has a few rough edges with the flow, but the imagery all the same is perfect. I love your style; the way you seem to bring your poetry to life. I am adding you to my favorites. Keep up the great work!

Letty

Aww this is such a sad poem...good...but sad...it is truly touching and coming from the heart...enjoyed it so much
Brandy

I love the repition. you expressed. "i miss you"

it creates alot of intrest for readers

Love it! Bout made me cry though! lol! Reminds me of what I use to have