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by David Dec 28, 2007
Love, romance /
Love so golden and new
Love so shiny and bright
You're my sword and my shield
That protects me every night.
Fights away all the darkness
Kills my demons too
Lends a helping shoulder
I am indebted to you
You're an angel from heaven
You're my sun in the sky
That eternally burns through my soul
The person there when I cry
This poem truely shows how grateful you are.
If only everyone had a "protector" like yours. amazing
Thats a lovely delicate poem hon, it really touches me as something special for a person to hang onto. xox sam
I liked this very much David, sometimes I think there is so much beauty in something being said simplistically but with emotion and sincerity,nice rhymes and flow.
by xxTaegan Emilyxx
I think the ending needed a bit more closure BUT once again i liked it. It was a great poem that i feel like i can relate to. You created great imagery with the words chosen to pull in the reader from the very first line. loved it
by Goran Rahim
Wow, so nicely written great poem
keep up the great work like always
a 5/5 from me as u deserve it truly