This is a really lovely and beautiful poem David.
"You're an angel from heaven
You're my sun in the sky
That eternally burns through my soul
The person there when I cry"
I loved that stanza. it deserves way more then a 5. 5/5
I think the ending needed a bit more closure BUT once again i liked it. It was a great poem that i feel like i can relate to. You created great imagery with the words chosen to pull in the reader from the very first line. loved it