Comments : Protector

  • 10 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Love so golden and new
    Love so shiny and bright
    You're my sword and my shield
    That protects me every night

    above mention lines are wonderful'

    nice work

  • 10 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    My sweet friend,

    So good to see you posting another of your wonderful poems. Please reconsider joining us once more at RTVW, hehe!


    5/5 Ingrid

  • 10 years ago

    by Kalee

    This is a really lovely and beautiful poem David.
    "You're an angel from heaven
    You're my sun in the sky
    That eternally burns through my soul
    The person there when I cry"
    I loved that stanza. it deserves way more then a 5. 5/5


  • 10 years ago

    by SpEcIaLmE

    Awwww thats so sweet i can really feel the love u have for this person
    "You're my sword and my shield
    That protects me every night." those 2 lines r just so amazing and sweet
    great work :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Kaila

    Wonderful jod david
    so long time no talk huh
    this is an excellent piece
    im glad you updated
    lovely job
    yours truly

  • 10 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, so nicely written great poem
    keep up the great work like always
    a 5/5 from me as u deserve it truly

  • 10 years ago

    by xxTaegan Emilyxx

    I think the ending needed a bit more closure BUT once again i liked it. It was a great poem that i feel like i can relate to. You created great imagery with the words chosen to pull in the reader from the very first line. loved it
    Taegan Emily

  • 10 years ago

    by Deana

    I liked this very much David, sometimes I think there is so much beauty in something being said simplistically but with emotion and sincerity,nice rhymes and flow.

  • 10 years ago

    by Lithium

    Thats a lovely delicate poem hon, it really touches me as something special for a person to hang onto. xox sam

  • 10 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    This poem truely shows how grateful you are.
    If only everyone had a "protector" like yours. amazing