This poem feels as if it's missing something and I feel stupid because I can't think of what that something is. It's a great poem thougth and I look forward to reading it again once you find that something.
When I read this my heart and eyes just light up..I love greek mythology and this was just so fun and awesome to read with the similies to those wondrous mythical maidens. This is just a beautigul, BEAUTIFUL mythical style write and it deserves nothing less than a 5/5. excellent form, flow and storyline amazing and going on my favs :)