Comments : My Happily Ever After<3

  • 11 years ago

    by MyEscape

    Awww....i like that this is a happy love poem because those are so rare. It has a nice flow and rhyme to it, and is filled with beautiful emotions.

  • 11 years ago

    by Kaila

    cutee again!
    this poem of yours made me aww at the end
    lovely work though
    everything was perfect
    no complaints from me

  • 11 years ago

    by here with u

    This is a very sweet poem.
    thanks for your comment :)

  • 11 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Awe. a very sweet and beautiful write. the first stanza was very attention grabbing and i simply HAD to read the rest. :]] this was a strong and emotional poem. powerful piece, a heartfelt read. amazingly done. 5/5. :]

  • 11 years ago

    by ABake

    First, your title was cliche and the little heart thingy threw me off a bit but I kept reading...

    Your first stanza was beautiful, after reading all four lines I had a smile on my face. They were so cliche yet ina beautiful way? Lol.

    The second stanza was not as appealing as the first while it was still beautiful. Just not to me. If that makes sense. Also the flow was a bit off...

    This is where I belong
    And where I want to stay
    Enveloped in your arms
    Is where I want to lay

    ^^ My favorite stanza. I love it. The word choice is amazing and the imagry just completes it. Great job on that one.

    Anywho..the fourth stanza didn't really stick out but the last two did. Oh man. I loved the fifth the most and the last lines of the entire peice summed it up greatly.

    I am glad you found happieness. Overall, a beautifully written peice of poetry. Great job.


  • 11 years ago

    by Blissful

    Beautiful! I loved the love expressed in each and every word .. u could really feel the passion you feel for this person. the flow was flawless and the descritpions were easy to relate with. Well done *5/5*

  • 11 years ago

    by jLegendc

    Oh my lord! this is a really sweet poem.. i loved how u started and ended it.. the flow was just wow.. but wait.. aren't u just 15 and u already hav a fiance? lol.. anywayz.. this poem is heart-melting.. i'd even consider marrying u if i read something like this... =D

  • 11 years ago

    by XxXcrystalXcontagiousXxX


  • 11 years ago

    by Not

    The first stanza is great i loved it...this poem is so sweet I wonderful wonderful work...=)!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Alexa Eudis

    Aw this is so cute!!!!!! i hope you really have a happily ever after

  • 11 years ago

    by hadia

    Aww, thats sooo cute!
    You two will have a happily ever after...

  • Very good poem its my favorite soo far i love you!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Nawa

    Great piece again.
    I love your usage of words and the way they rhyme. Your poems are really sweet and they speak of deep love.
    This is my fav. part

    "This is where I belong
    And where I want to stay
    Enveloped in your arms
    Is where I want to lay"

  • 10 years ago

    by NicoleBaby101

    That was just.....WOW!!!! i so loved it!!!!!! WOW!!!!! 5/5