Comments : Rebel Against Corruption

  • 9 years ago

    by Marius Laun

    Wow.......... THe only thing i could say as a word of improvement would be to add a little bit more on the topic and and another stanza or two. But your analysis of the world and it's ignorance to wrong doings is incredibly acurate. I'll spread word of this around, Everything was well written.

  • 9 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Hmm, this poem was written about a thought. It seems kinda vague. You were very descriptive in your writing about how you felt. But something feels like its missing. The ending was fabulous and I loved it. And the flow was good as well. But I have to give this a 4/5.

    Keep up the good work :)

  • 9 years ago

    by robin milford

    Wow I enjoyed this one thanks for your comment on "Wind beneath my wings"