Comments - Astronaut

Bassel Samman ( F P C D ) at 2008-07-01

Simply breath taking.

Kristina ( F P C D ) at 2008-07-01

Wow babe. This.. is uber powerful.
wonderful use of imagery...its utterly breathtaking... and, im really speechless.
Its amazing, as you are babe.
She'll come back...

Aish ( F P C D ) at 2008-07-03

Absolutely brilliant!!!!!!!!!!
very very very good!!!!!!!!! love the language and the imagery!!!
a devastating ending, brilliant writing

S R P ( F P C D ) at 2008-07-16

This poem was absolutely amazing. I loved it, and honestly, there's nothing I would have improved. Thank you for sharing.

Jenn at 2008-07-24

I dont even know what to say
this poem is great

Phantasmagoria ( F P C D ) at 2008-08-19

"exhaustion laces through her sweet fingers"


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