Comments : Mortal Melody

  • 8 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Cassie you are such a damn good writer O.o

    This piece is sad - this is true, but that element of a kinda hope is just heartwreching and uhg....epic write....your descriptive writing skills are excellent and you apint for the reader such a vivid image.

    Excellent.

  • 8 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Cassie you are such a damn good writer O.o

    This piece is sad - this is true, but that element of a kinda hope is just heartwreching and uhg....epic write....your descriptive writing skills are excellent and you apint for the reader such a vivid image.

    Excellent.

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I agree with Ben and as I myself have said countless times, your description and imagery are brilliant and so naturally done.
    A wonderful piece.
    All the best,
    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    This brought tears to my face and I have goosebumps. Absolutely incredible, I hope someone else will nominate it, unfortunately I've used all three already.

  • 8 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Way to write. I sure will put this into consideration.
    I enjoyed reading.

  • 8 years ago

    by Ayesha Dev

    It iz just awesome.The lines are damn touching.

  • 8 years ago

    by Sunshine

    This is brilliantly written. It wraps up a whole self-story. I enjoyed reading this over and over again because it leaves such an impact on the reader. Wanting them to search between the lines for more emotions, more info, some slipping words.

    I believe its one of the best poems for this weeek.

    Hats off for the flow and imagination skills. Very creative.

    Keep the great work!