Hello Naomi

As sad as this piece is, I do appreciate the technical difficulty of it. five quatrains of rhyming couplets where every last word rhymes.
Cleverly done - not easy at all.

*someone's shoe.

Take care and do try to cheer yourself, girl,

Ben

Naomi, Naomi, Naomi when we hurt so much and its all we know we don't feel good enough for anything else but believe me girl you are good enough. These people that hurt us aren't remorseful and they should be but then again haven't thru made us stronger regardless of what we think? Yes, we may hurt but we are strong, you are strong.
Keep your head above the water and you won't go far wrong.

Em
Edit: anckle is without the 'c'

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Hi Naomi,
this is a sad poem and I do feel you... sometimes life give us problems and give us the best solution...I know you are a tough girl.
About your poem, this a brilliant astute write...the hurt and the feelings comes out... and also the rhyming is perfect.it's a WOW

well done 5/5

Gel

Naomi, I am going to tell you the same thing I have told Em. You are special, you are a worthwhile person. You are also here fore a reason. That reason may have not made itself clear yet but it's out there. The people who hurt you are not worth your time or energy. It takes a whole lot more to live in this world than to chuck it all and call it quits. You are stronger than you think or give yourself credit. So to heck with the haters, stay strong, hold your head up and live your life! Hugs to you-

Hi Naomi,

I'm sorry you're feeling this way. It's awful to feel like you have no self worth. You've described these feelings well in a rhyme scheme that catches the readers attention.

Naomi, you do have self worth - shed loads! !!

Take care,

Michael xx