What to say.
This is beautiful.
I love that you were subtle
And made your readers think.
You didn't just say what you meant.
You went around it.
Lol.
I think it's called "beating around the bush".
I love poems like this.
5/5, yo.

Hey,
a beautiful poem, it flows nicely and i like the words you used. i especially like first stanza =)
nice work 5/5
kisses stephanie

A good poem with a sweet harmony of words. a great poem sung in a sad melody.

your servant:
david

This is a beautifully sad piece of poetry you have written here. Nicely penned with a nice flow. The vocab was amazing. Good job keep it up ~mel

This was amazing and beautiful I loved the words that you picked. I also loved how you made each verse and line very short so it didnt take away from the message in your poem. Some of the metaphores were so unique that it just made it ten times better. %5/5 definatly. nice work.