Submission date : 2008-04-09
That's really touching!
I think it's great that you are able to right about something serious like that!
Im glad that theres someone who cares about the people there. great poem.. i found that somethings didnt rhyme as someone would think a poem to be but you made it all up at the end .. great poem keep wrighting
Alex ( C )
Dam...this is great. ive seen videos of how the bomb affected poeple but you put the pain and suffering in a way were we can all feel.. i think this poem is amazing.. =)