Submission date : 2008-10-23
Leap Of Faith aka Temps ( F P C D )
I love how the word Reflection was the message or the word that made up the poem, and then it was the last word of the poem.. that really was a great way to end it. Secondly, word choice was great hun, and I don't think the flow could have been any better. Nearly flawless write, very sad yet.. I enjoyed it very much. I think these acrostics are a bit addicting, don't you think? 5/5. :]
Dark Savior ( F P C D )
This piece is really good. I enjoyed it and felt that it was really good. I've done something similar to this only not in this style.
F or your and all to see.
F or you and all to see. is what I believe it should be.
very good poem and liked it.