Boys I Fell In Love With

by Maria   Jul 8, 2014


-Did you like our kiss as much as I did?
Yeah...but we are not together right?

-I'm sad, lonely, and I miss you more than ever
That sure happens a lot

-Could you come by tonight, I wanna see you
I'm going out with the boys, some other day though

We really need to talk
-Don't break up with me please

-Where were you last night
I got drunk and slept with some girl but I still love you

-I miss you
Move on

-I'm sorry I'm such a mess
it's too late for that

-I'll get better just give me some time
You're f**ked up, you're never getting better

I miss you
-No you don't

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  • 9 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I like the style of poem you have picked here, the conversation between 2 people, and how it is the opposite. Really good idea, and you have pulled it off well.

    There could be a little bit more detail in the poem, maybe a bit more description of the emotions behind your words etc, but the layout and wording that you have is a great start.

    I enjoyed this

    • 9 years ago

      by Maria

      Thank you very, very much for your insight.

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