The Hell I Awoke To

by WritingtheStars   Oct 20, 2014


He kissed my nose
and told me he loved me
and this time he actually meant it.
Smiles and pure love and happiness
filled the air.

The I woke up...
to you not talking to me.
And the sky began to cry
because everyone thought
we would last,
even me.

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  • 9 years ago

    by CuteThingsGoneWrong

    I lived this for so long with a certain poet on here. I never told her a dang thing about it, to worried what she would have thought at the time so in disappeared. Young back then. I love this poem because who can't relate to waking up to a dream of the person they love, it's heart wrenching. The way you penned the twob stanza was expertly. I'm very amazed.. I actually did this the last time I slept.so relatable

  • 9 years ago

    by Liz

    I love that this is so short and to the point. The contrast between both stanzas. One happy, one heartbroken. the wording, flow and feeling are perfect. </3

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