I Feel So Alone

by Erin

It's like I'm lost,
I'm just giving up slowly,
This problem is haunting me,
I feel so lonely.

Depression has sunk in,
Suicide sounds nice,
I feel so numb,
My body like ice.

Tearing open my wounds,
Ripping out my eyes,
This pain never subsides,
No one hears my cries.

I feel so alone,
Like I'm lost at sea,
I can't even breathe,
It's like I'm not me.

I made a mistake,
But don't we all?
Why must I,
Be the only one to fall?

Fate hates me,
and I hate it,
But it's not letting me live,
It will never quit.

Where is my heart?
Its left my chest,
I don't understand,
I can never do my best.

I should just leave this world,
and take them with me,
Not let them have a chance,
So everyone can see;

I was never happy,
Not for one moment,
Every single tear,
Was time not worth spent.

So before another can drop,
Or I can feel this way again,
Let's take my life,
It won't be like it's been.


Submission date : 2005-05-29

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meg at 2005-05-29

this is one of the best poems i've read in a long time.. it really expresses how you feel and it touched me because i can relate.. if you ever need to talk just IM or email me.. when it feels like your world is closing in on you and you feel as if you can't breathe.. stay strong, or you will suffocate.. you are better than your problems, always remember that.. *5/5*
~bunches of hugs and love~

Julie ( F P C ) at 2005-06-08

WOW, Erin that poem is like wow...I really dont know what to say! Its really great...You know im always here for you darl..
Love you forever and always
Love Julie