Submission date : 2005-09-04
Go Away Rain.
This is a great poem, you can really feel the emotion and anger. I think you did a really wonderful job on this one.
XxCrazy4youxX ( F P C )
~*That was so0o0o good and i know how you feel....well written and thanks for voteing on my poem...means alot...*~
Hey umm im jus goin to say something once ok and dontt ake em the wrong way but you know how you said all u had was ahte ? well i thought all i had in my heart was hate for my father and he died and i felt so bad b/c for years i wished him dead and now he is and it just hurts b/c my dad was like what you ahve explained and im sorry for that but you know theres only one guy that is you true blood dad and he will love you weather he shows it or not give him another chance before its too late
Edward D Zurovec ( F P C D )
Saddening to read this poem. You certainly have a right to be angry. Life comes at us hard at times and not always how we would like. Don't judge him to harshly though, through him you have become a pretty good Poet!
Peace and Blessings
only so sad.