Alzheimers

by ღtheღcrunkღpirateღ

Memory slowly fades
like petals falling from a rose
more noticeable as time goes by
til all that remains is the naked stem
a constant reminder of what was once there

~or~

a constant reminder of the beauty that was once there

-not sure which ending is better, tell me what you think-

 

Submission date : 2005-12-11

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Stabbylou ( F C D ) at 2005-12-11

Wow, that is truly amazing, i prefered the first ending as it seems to fit better. Either way, a great poem x

~*~Morgan~*~ ( P C D ) at 2005-12-11

First