I tried so hard...

by *screenplayofdesire*

I tried so hard to fall for you
the way you did for me
But i couldnt no matter how i tried
and i just want you to see
I care about you so damned much
this pain tears me apart inside
and in the end i just want you to know
i tried, my friend, i tried

 

Submission date : 2006-10-03

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ilovepencils at 2006-11-16

Hey
I like your poem cos it's really direct and powerful. And it's short, too, which makes it even more direct. good job :)