by ~ * Shattered Bloody Tears * ~          Dec 20, 2006
    
        category :
            Sadness, depression /
            grieving, loss
            
    
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            When he took that last breathe,   | 
by Brittany
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 When i was a kid my dad sang that to me too.. only it's not him i lost... my mom died too its ok.. everyone goes through hell and back.. im still in it right now... this is a cute poem i like it alot 5/5  | 
by christina
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 That poem was very beautiful it moved me to tears just reading it. you are a very good poet I hope you dont give up on it cause I think you will go far.  |