by ~ * Shattered Bloody Tears * ~
Submission date : 2006-12-19
Lisa
at 2006-12-20
Thank you so much for writing thisi poem. My dad died 6 years ago and he used to sing me that song every day...and your poem made me cry because i miss him so much, but it also made me happy to hear that song again...so thank you and I hope you hold on to your dad forever and never take him for granted.
christina
at 2006-12-24
That poem was very beautiful it moved me to tears just reading it. you are a very good poet I hope you dont give up on it cause I think you will go far.
Brittany ( F )
at 2006-12-24
When i was a kid my dad sang that to me too.. only it's not him i lost... my mom died too its ok.. everyone goes through hell and back.. im still in it right now... this is a cute poem i like it alot 5/5
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