Emptiness

by ღtheღcrunkღpirateღ

Inside of my head is a dark carvern
an empty space
dark, airless, stagnant

im waiting for someone
waiting for something
to shine a light
to breathe a breath of fresh air
to save me from myself

could it be him
could it be you
i know the correct answer
but then again i dont

 

Submission date : 2006-12-28

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Poetvoices ( F P C D ) at 2007-01-14

"i know the correct answer
but then again i dont"
COLD CHILLS! This was a wonderful couplet!! :)
PV