Submission date : 2007-02-16
just keenan ( F P C D )
Soo much pain from soo much love soo sad:'( must be torture for the guy also he must be like crying all the time not being with u. i know im sad all the time when im not with or talking to u... i love you lots and hopefully talking to u at night will last forever and ever
James Bernard Overzet
Excellent poem Alissa, This one really drives the theme home, full of passion and emotion. Mikey Likey. :)
deadwithoutlove keenan ( F P C D )
Hmm i know i read this b4 but i wanted to again
it was a very good poem
i hope you dont ever feel like this again
if this is true that is
im off to sleep as soon as this song is done
so ill ttyl
good job on this poem again lol
InvisiblyBroken15 ( F P C D )
Long but worth the read....
there was so much emotion in this poem..and its like i could feel it as i was reading....
i really enjoyed this one.
SheenaMarie ( C )
Amazing emotion... Excellent write 5/5