No Sense

by Katie   Jan 2, 2008


It's so pathetic
It makes no sense at all
You gave everything away
Years now lost
Do you even care?

It's not right
The way things play out
The way things end
It's not fair

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  • 16 years ago

    by Rob Matt

    Its slightly weak. the stucture isnt very stong, but the words are good.