This is cool. i can relate to it. it's like you'd rather them not talk at all if they cant show you, prove to you that what they they say is what they mean. you also used repetition and it really hones in the message that saying isnt doing.
splendiforous=)
rach

This lets out a lot of anger and passion, but is presented clearly and creatively, in my opinion at least. 5/5

Wow i rele like it!! 5/5

Rachael said exactly what i was thinking.
5/5 this was great and so true about love.

"But I'm so sick of singing love songs..."

UH-MAY-ZING line. yes. very much so.

good job.

<3 Ashes

I loved this. Everythin just flowed so easely and flawlessly. The emotions were ones I could relate with. Actions do speak louder then words and sometimes people are just all talk with no walk. Well done *5/5*

Oh i love it the ending line is so great, and unexpected, i really really like this one... 5/5

Damn, I know that's right. Hell dudes always freaking say one thing and show another, but sooner or later a dude will see that when a woman's fed up that like an animal we will go on the prowel. Finding a good man to cherish, honor, respect, and appreciate the love his stupid ass left behind. I did this poem a lot.

Great!! loved your meaing and power here!! well done!1 :):)

Nice work you done i enjoy reading your work and i wait your new one 5/5

When you said " i am so sick of singing love songs" i instantly thought of the paramore song called "stop this song (lovesick melody)"
check out the lyrics, it relates alot.
I got me through a very hard time.
i love it. once again!

Yeah! It's really true! People are just good in words but in action! I'd rather meet someone who loves me by acting than someone who will just be speaking! Hehe.. Got carried away.. Nice poem! I really love it! 5/5