Supernatural

So! this is my first contest, so i'll try my best to do this right.

the topic is supernatural, preferably vampires, werewolves, and so on down that line.(nephilium too) This being my first contest, i will accept 10 poems so hold your place now. this will end the last friday of the month so you have roughly 3 weeks.

1st - 4 comments with ratings of your poems
2nd - 3 comments with ratings
3rd - 2 comment with rating
4th-10th will each get 1 rating or comment

1.spc ernst
2.cayce
3.lady nik
4.peace in the womb
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Sign me up, already done, Dark Specters

Dark Specters,

One night i awoke,
Silence broke the sound,
My body became heavy,
It was has if it was bound,

I tried to get up,
I just couldn't move,
My body was my own chains,
to this floor, black and smooth,

then thy came upon me,
My soul burned when they came near,
My heart now dead, beat-less,
My soul knew no fear,

I looked at these Judges of dread,
I spat at there feet,
his white lips moved like a ghost,
Now my maker i will meet,

Dream be it not,
This, my friend, was real,
Judges of horror,
My hate did they feel,

They wore long cloaks,
hoods covered all but their mouths,
I felt the blank stare,
And cursed everyone of them has i let out,

these demons are from hell,
They search for their master,
They found my soul,
And this to them was disaster,

For my mortal voice,
And my mortal eyes,
Not curse their name,
Not wittiness true demise,

Is my mind so evil?
My heart so impure?
these specters mistake me,
for what is evils core....

Samuel J, Ernst

Can it be explicit?

To a certain extent i suppose, though i'd prefer nothing that'd be "back room of the book/video store" ^_^

Wolf in Her Dreams

Cool breeze in her hair,
Under the Full red moon-
Tonight's blood still on her lips.

Flesh sliced clean,
Ten feet underground.
She buried the bloody strips.

The tattooed paw aches
Under a tight a leather holster
And a gun.

Tonight she has turned sin
Into a frightening game of fun.

Death sparkles in her eyes
As she paints murder in her dreams.
Teeth snarl in the dark,
Hearing little girls scream.

She's not a monster anymore,
Just a lonely battered soul.
Leave her at peace,
Let her make herself whole.

Edgy, i need to step my game up, request to change poem? lol, jk, but this poem is awesome!

Both great poems, i like that they're totally different takes too

I wanna try :]

"Tales of the Night"

So much blood--

So much of my own blood,
covering what use to be
a floor. Arms weak, nerves
decaying, legs twisted.
I should have trusted my
gut feeling, now I can't even
feel my gut.

An ambiguous noise stabs through
the silence. Laughter?
No. Crying? Screaming?
Someone is screaming...
wait... I am screaming!

Panic snakes its way into my
thoughts, making me weary of my
state of mind. Something or
rather someone is watching me
from that corner. I can't tell if it can
see me but those red eyes are
haunting. Instant delirium
over comes my psyche.

I have seconds to decipher
the visions my head is
throwing at me. So much blood--
Bitten. I was bitten. My innocence
ripped from my soul and
devoured by this beast. "VAMPIRE!"
I scream the word like it's a curse.
It springs forth ready to attack me
when a single burst of light
stops it in mid air.

Suddenly my senses become
overwhelmed with the stench
and sight of rotten flesh. Saved
by this stranger, this
stranger that heard my screams.
He tells me I have nothing
to fear, as his red eyes gaze through
my soul.

^
Nice Nik! :]

Thank you :] yours was good too deary

Nicely done nik ^_^ (vamipres are my favorite supernaturals lol)

[ Hold My Heavy Burden ]
By: MaryAnne

Carrying your split needles
Pierces the sides of my heart,
Swelling to insidious paces
Where I thrash on cold walls.

This natural life is fabricated,
Touched by something
We are not capable of having.
Though the moon malingers
We are entrapped by skin,
Sought upon as extinguishers
Of a light already captured.

Our irascible love sears all,
Until the soil is sickened
And we run through everyone
As if we could be invisible
In the world's innocent massacre.

Caught in a shadow of passion-
Inseparable by body
Innumerable by force,
We shudder into each other.

Fixations with no face,
Masticated between eternity's
Incapacity to fill them.

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Oooh nice. i like that it wasn't "in the box" topic of supernatural too

okay people, friday i won't be able to get on, my mom will be with me and she can't see this lol so it will have to end thursday, sorry!

Okay sorry, here it is:

1- cayce
2 - spc ernst
3 - nik
4 - peace in the womb

i will get the comments and ratings as soon as i can, thnx for being patient

GOBLINS..

From underneath the bed,
goblins will find their way
to whisper in your ears..
Watch out. Here they come.
Listen to their footsteps.
Tip - Tip - Tip - Tip -
They are very, very near.
Clear. Their way is clear.
They opened the door!
Slip under your blanket.
Watch out. They might tear it.
Don't breathe- just hush.
They all came in. Listen.
Just be good. They won't bite you.
Goblins are nice if you are, too.
Now don't be scared. They are gone.
They knew you're a good child,
so they went and won't come back
ever again. Good night baby.
Sweet dreams for you and for me.

Thank you! :)