Save Me

by I Dont Care Bear   Feb 8, 2008


Am I wasting my time,
Dreaming,
In hopes that they just,
Might come true?
Dreaming for an eternity?
Or should I wake up,
To pain and loneliness?
I am quite used to that.
Please don't chose that road for me,
Please Save Me!

~<3Tyfani .K.<3~

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  • 14 years ago

    by I Dont Care Bear

    Dreaming for an eternity therefore meaning the feeling that you are dreaming till the end.

  • 14 years ago

    by Ray Smallshaw

    Sorry I did not GET this poem or the stanza dreaming of an eternity? we all face eternity in one form or another I think you need to qualify this as the form falls flat and eternity is after all forever. Ray S

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    No, you're not wasting your time. beautiful poem. <3

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