Comments : Tattoo

  • 16 years ago

    by Fanny

    Really nice poem it really meant something and the words rhymed perfectly it was really well written poem.keep writing your good at it .loved the poem

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    Flows and rhymes wonderfully...Sad memories carved like a tattoo in your heart are rather permanent and wont go away juz like daT..A very powerful emotion was portrayed as if it can never be healed again..Words choice were perfect and supportive for the title and poem's objective..

    Brilliant piece from a brilliant writer..

    Keep it up..

    **Hugzz**

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Nice .. Just like MauLiciOuSss said 'sad memories carved like a tattoo in your heart are rather permanent and wont go away'

    So true and very factual.
    Great imagery [5.5]

    Best wishes,

    Sarah

  • 15 years ago

    by i care about him

    This is a wonderful poem. i love it so much!!! keep up the good work 5/5