Dont tell me she cheated on you!!!! cuz if she did god help that i dotn find out who she is!!

Awww!! So sadddd! You're emotions just shine through in this poem. It was making me sad while I was reading it. A lot of people could relate to this poem. The flow was amazing! Everything was great! Sooo good job!

Cayce x

It was a fine written piece, I think it flowed nicely, good job. You have one minor error in this poem..

But yet maybe you (did'nt), on top of another guy in lace
= Didn't

It made me cry
i loved it anything that can make me cry is worth a 5/5 beautiful poem and a well written one at that

tears

Stars look like sweet teardrops of remorse

when I read this... I cried!
maybe I'm just a baby
but i felt that the whole poem was powerfull and emotionall and I love it! im adding to my favs=]

I relate highly as many others can on this site.Very beautiful and full of heart felt emotion.5/5

-Amber